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Disappointment


The leaves are turning yellow.
The earth is cracked and dry.
The grass crying, curling, dying,
reaching to the sky.

The clouds are black and heavy
The scorching sun has fled
Lightning flashing ,thunder rolling,
somewhere over head

A gust of wind rips harshly.
The trees begin to sway.
drip drop, the clouds are banished,
no rain, I think, today.
Virgina is in drought

the birch trees are yellow and there are cracks in the pasture 35cm wide, but we almost got rain.
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roovel Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2007
Autumn, or winter ?
or a simple melancholic feeling of your self.. projecting in those melodic and flowless moments..

i like how this flow l e s s y grow with those words an each line.. when boom; like it's an illusion of your own mind.. no ! there no rain, I think '?', still that little doubtful evil in u, today.. u were lost after this kinda of day even if maybe some minutes.. it seemed eternal

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135711cal Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2007
It was so dry here that the leaves on the birch trees were turning yellow, but it was early summer.

thank you :)
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roovel Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2007
hehe ok.. summer :giggle:
i completely missd that one..

u're welcome :)
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icklne Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
Very well done.....
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135711cal Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2007
thank you,
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icklne Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2007
welcome
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creeps2002 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
I really like it ;p I can relate to it also - we have just experienced our worst drought in over a hundred years :(
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135711cal Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007
thank you,
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creeps2002 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2007
No worries ;p
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Unluckycharm6 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
I liked it, it has good meter :)
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